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    Post Forum Story about Pheromones (limit 5 sentences per post)

    After seeing the three-word story, it inspired me to start this one. Let's all write a

    story where the characters use pheromones from this site, and different events unfold as a result. Here are the

    guidelines, similar to the three-word thread.

    1. Anyone can contribute.
    2. There is a limit of five (5)

    sentences per post, with the exception of the first one, where ground rules and the story is laid out.
    3. Posts

    need to have good grammar, spelling, and punctuation (doesn't have to read like a college paper, but can't be like

    MySpace either), and sentences must be a reasonable length.
    4. The same person is NOT allowed to make two

    consecutive posts in a row.
    5. The post being added must have some semblance of a coherent flow with the story in

    the most recent post.
    6. Keep it up for as long as your creativity allows.

    And, without further ado, on with the

    story.



    It was a dark and hectic night. Four men were sitting around a house, playing cards. Suddenly,

    lights went out, and there was a loud scream outside. When the lights came back on, one man ran to the front door

    to check things out. He saw a woman lying on the front step and fearfully touching her neck with her fingers. There

    was a long trail of footprints on the snow, extending from the front step to the forest past the yard. It appeared

    to go farther into the forest, but actually ended at the property line.

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    Judging from the woman's DIHL

    and the yellow steam rising from the snowy footsteps, she was obviously the victim of a vicious NPA assault. Even

    Joey No-Nostrils - so named because doctors had sewn his nostrils shut after failing cocaine treatment - was not

    oblivious to the acrid sharpness hovering in the air. "Lets look around" said one of the guys, obviously a

    go-getter. "Good idea" said another, who was always sucking up to the first guy.

    Just then they all suddenly and

    simultaneously noticed
    Last edited by idesign; 11-05-2009 at 05:03 AM. Reason: Reread the rules... oops


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    her BMW parked nearby, door

    ajar,
    her USB flash drive on the ground beside her,
    her "L-S Rocks!" pin glistening in her lapel,
    her DKNY

    sweater wet with sweat (or was it something else?),
    and her AMA membership card clutched in her hand





    (okay I made it 5 lines not sentences... but it's neen a long day)
    The opposite of love isn't hate.
    It's apathy
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    Igancio, the man who went

    outside first, leaned over the woman and said: "I'm certified to give first aid. Now, what's the last thing you

    remember happening?" The woman didn't answer him, just gazed with a strange combination of disorientation and lust

    in her eyes. "It's NPA, all right", Ignacio mumbled. Then he turn to Karl (the go-getter), and blurted out: "go

    check the car!"

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    Karl cautiously approached the BMW,

    noting, again, that the passenger side door, which was facing him, was slightly ajar.

    What struck him as odd

    was there were no footprints around the car anywhere that he could see.

    Could it be that there was someone

    still inside?

    Glancing toward the rear of the vehicle, Karl could see fresh tire tracks, but they seemed to

    mysteriously fade away rather quickly, almost as if the car was dropped and it rolled forward to where it now sat.



    Suddenly Karl stopped in his tracks, startled by an odd scratching noise that seemed to be eminating from the rear

    of the car...
    The opposite of love isn't hate.
    It's apathy
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    While Karl was fiddling

    around with the car, Joey went to investigate the footprints. They formed a clean, straight line from the front

    step and just stopped right where the yard ended and a dense forest began. "Whoever hurt that woman must have run

    off into the forest", Joey thought, "but why aren't there any footprints there?" He looked up, and saw that some

    of the trees didn't have as much snow on them as the rest. Suddenly, he heard Karl yell: "hey Joey, get a load of

    this!"
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